建立業(yè)務(wù)關(guān)系的信函是這樣寫嗎？

各位前輩，朋友，本人走出校門，第一次踏上外貿(mào)這個行業(yè)。以前在學(xué)校學(xué)的都是理論知識，如今要付出實踐，第一次寫外貿(mào)信函給老外，尚不知理論與實踐有多大區(qū)別。請各位前輩、朋友多多指教，本人在此萬分感謝！

dear sirs

we he obtained your name and address through the china bank newyork branch.we take the liberty of writing to you with iew to building up business relations with your firm.we are a compang specializing in export of chinese textiles.these products he a good market in europe.we are enclosing herewith a catalogue for your examination.should any of the items be of interest to you,please contact us.

in our trade with merchants of various countries,we always adhere to the principal of equality and mutual benefit.it is our hope to promote,by joint efforts,both trade and friendship to our mutual advantage.

we look forward to receiving your enquiries soon.

yours faithfully

請各位前輩和朋友能分享一下從學(xué)校到工作、從理論到實踐、從始到現(xiàn)在的你們的經(jīng)歷和經(jīng)驗，讓我們新人可以多多學(xué)習(xí)，本人在此再次感謝！